Thoughts flutter throughout the day. Few stay, few flit, few need to be celebrated. Thoughts are man’s gift, valuable enough to cherish for infinity. In a hope to immortalize those thoughts, I etch words onto this blog wishing all the way to carry them further into the world.
Monday, 21 April 2014
#21NaPoWriMo: Unreal path
Image belongs to Karthikeyan Gopinathan
confidence clouded
scared
I walk down this path
my shadow follows.
no silver linings are visible
nor is the light at the
end of the tunnel
just this uncertain path
that leads down.
it looks normal really
the trees and the people
then why does the
the lights and darkness play
patterns?
throwing illusions
that obscure clarity?
maybe it is the mist
the hovers around me
breathing a fog of
unreal.
yet, so real.
i walk alone
and scared,
my shadow follows.
will you walk this path with me?
maybe two
shadows can fight the mist
but nothing is real here
so don't follow me.
just send help.
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Very suggestive. I love your expressivity!
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I am glad you liked it!
DeleteAh poetry, a worded work of art. Nice poem dear. :)
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Poetry is definitely an art. Thank you, Jho :)
DeleteYou wrote this yourself? It's fab! Love the accompanying photo as well :) x
ReplyDeleteYes I did, Tang :) Thank you so much! The credits for the picture goes to my cousin!
DeleteLove the poem! <3
ReplyDeleteI tagged you in a tag! http://olivia-savannah.blogspot.nl/2014/04/a-whole-lot-of-questions-tag.html