Monday, 21 April 2014

#21NaPoWriMo: Unreal path

Image belongs to Karthikeyan Gopinathan
confidence  clouded
I walk down this path
my shadow follows.

no silver linings are visible
nor is the light at the
end of the tunnel
just this uncertain path
that leads down.

it looks normal really
the trees and the people
then why does the
the lights and darkness play
throwing illusions
that obscure clarity?

maybe it is the mist
the hovers around me
breathing a fog of
yet, so real.

i walk alone
and scared,
my shadow follows.

will you walk this path with me?
maybe  two
shadows can fight the mist
but nothing is real here
so don't follow me.
just send help.


  1. Very suggestive. I love your expressivity!
    Coco et La vie en rose / Bloglovin / Facebook

  2. Ah poetry, a worded work of art. Nice poem dear. :)
    Olive Needs Popeye

  3. You wrote this yourself? It's fab! Love the accompanying photo as well :) x

    1. Yes I did, Tang :) Thank you so much! The credits for the picture goes to my cousin!

  4. Love the poem! <3

    I tagged you in a tag!


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